Reveiwing People's Reviews

Reviews on Dr. Horrible Sing Along Blog, from Popcorn With The Movie, MaskinPham Masking You, and Black_Cat XIII:
By Kiki and T

Popcorn With The Movies:
Kiki- On a first note, the death ray doesn't suddenly blow up. It blew up with he pulled the trigger, which Dr. Horrible tried warning him about. Secondly, you really shouldn't give away the ending for people that haven't seen it. That ruins it for people.
As for the structure of the blog, Salt might want to check the punctuation before publishing. There were some unused commas and maybe one period that should have been put in some places. As for Butter, you might want to making a little bit of longer sentences and put a little more information and detail in what you're talking about.
T- I am a little annoyed with this review. Not only did you let the ending be known, which is a big "no, no", because it ruins it for people who haven't seen the movie, but also that you said the death ray suddenly blew up. It was damaged by captain hammer, that is why it blew up when he pulled the trigger. Though, it was a good move giving a rating on the movie and explaining why you thought what you did.

MaskingPham Making You:
Kiki- From what I can tell, your grammar, punctuation, and spelling is all in order. You did good with your facts of the movie and its nice to hear what it is about. Though, it would be nice to know more of what YOU personally thought of the movie.
T- You did an excellent job of giving the review without telling the whole story. You also did well with giving an explanation of why you thought what you did about the movie and used a funny quote from the movie. I say that this review is very well made.

Black_Cat XIII:
Kiki- You did good on giving your opinion, after all that is what the whole paragraph is. Though, you need to combine some of your sentences to make them longer, check your grammar, and put more facts and research into what actually happens in the movie and some information about the actors.
T- It was not to happy, the happiness is a huge part of what makes it funny. In the beginning it is happy and it is not happy in the end at all. The funny parts were not that long, not long enough to ruin it or drag it out. The end is weird, because of the fact that it was made to have a sequel like many other movies.